Sam 100WC T3W5
As me and my best friend Isabella strolled down the gorgeous streets of Barcelona we inhaled the sweet aroma of churros and we felt a rush of excitement. Today is especially pretty with the temperature at 25 degrees and the city filled with chatty and happy people. I spun my head around to see Isabella’s frightened face and looked forward to see a vehicle plowing down the streets and taking people as he went. As it came rushing towards us we screamed I pushed Isabella out of the way but didn’t have time to get out of the way myself…..
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