Monday, 21 August 2017
Alice T3WK4 100WC
“Stop Ethan!!” I cried. This is what our cramped family car sounded like when we went on long car trips. It was me, my irritating brother Ethan, mum and dad and we were going on a tropical holiday in Tonga. Suddenly a massive wild dog and it’s week old puppy jumped on the road in front of us. The poor dog only wanted to protect her puppy……. As it came rushing towards us we all screamed and dad slammed on the brakes, the old car skidding from the sudden stop……...We breathed a sigh of relief, it was all ok.
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