It was a balmy day and the weather was finally starting to get better, my family and I decided to take a quick dip in the ocean before it got dark. When we got there the water was right out. So we decided to discover more, then mum suddenly yelled; “it’s a tsunami, run!” As it came rushing towards us we ran back to the car and grabbed our surfboards, We quickly ran back towards the water and we got ready for the wave to hit us, I was so frightened because the wave was so huge. Then all of a sudden it hit us like a truck and we were heading towards the end of the beach.
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