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Skipping along in the water I take a deep breath to the surface. The hunters are ready to come in the water. I sink to the ocean floor and get a grip around me. Ropes pull me in closer as the guns get ready to fire. There a bang and next thing I know i'm swimming for my life. Two divers chasing after me but my tail takes me as fast as I can go. I find myself upon the rock me and my best friends go on all the time. I lost them. Sitting, laughing I know i'm safe.
Monday, 14 August 2017
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ireally like your story it was cool
ReplyDeleteLove the story but little confused at the end!?
ReplyDeletePoppy
i really liked it rylee
ReplyDeleteI really liked the storyline of the seal swimming away from the hunters but why was the seal laughing when it lost it's friends?
ReplyDeleteEmma