It was the 1st of April which meant it was April fools. I thought I will play a trick on my
mate
Lenny the seal and see how he reacts.
I had made sure I had got up nice and early.
Lenny was on the side of a rock fast asleep, I had the perfect opportunity to push
him into the water. I crept up on him so he couldn't hear my thumping footsteps, I was just
about to push him in when he snapped at my legs pulling me into the water
When I bobbed up again he yelled “April Fools is on you” and he laid back down
cracking up with laughter.
Nice job Connor! Really like the way you wrote you story and had a nice story line to read. Next time try to use a little more depth in your writing and expand your word vocabulary. Good work.
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Nice story it is a little funny maybe next time use more punctuation
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