The Best Story I Never Wrote
I sat down staring at my computer, unenthusiastic to start. Sometimes I really can’t be bothered to write this short story, even though it’s only one hundred words. My one hundred word challenge, it’s really not that bad just the thought of starting sort of puts me off. Oh well, I started writing. I had a good idea, the boy who could fly. I was quite proud of my work, probably the best I have ever done! I shut my computer, satisfied. Then suddenly it went dark, I was in my bed curled up in my blankets. A dream REALLY?
I loved the title its very different. I also liked the way you set out the story very unique!!
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challenge,*It's really no that bad.
Thank you Alice good point i do that alot forgive me i was tired.
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ReplyDeleteWow I really liked how you wrote the story about a story.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time make the story go with the sentence.
Poppy
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ReplyDeleteGreat job Rosie! Really liked the way you linked your story to what we do in class and really enjoyed your storyline. Next time try to use more grabbing the reader's attention sentences and more hooking words.
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I liked the storyline and how its different then most other 100WC.
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