My family and I all live on a farm.
One day we were out in our garden
getting all of our vegetables for our feast.
We noticed that the sky was going
darker and darker. I wondered what
was happening. I ran into the
house to ask my mum. She came
outside and said that it was an eclipse
and that I needed to go and get
my sunglasses. I hadn’t heard of
an eclipse before so I did as she said.
When I got back she explained
what it was and then suddenly
it went dark. It was amazing.
Sunday 27 August 2017
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I really like how you used something that was real/that was happening.
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