Sunday, 27 August 2017

Benji 100WC T3W6 xD

100WC

Stan was working at flaming fast burgers Hq in Seattle Washington. He had just come in for his night shift as a security surveillance monitor. The time seemed to never go by. There was no one in the building at that time of night and he was getting so bored he decided to go get a bite to eat at the huge cafeteria.Wue camera light to navigate back to the surveillance. He saw men with clown masks on and tried to escape. But it was too late.

3 comments:

  1. I like your story it is quite scarey but I like it hah

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  2. Funny story I liked it, just wondering if wue is an abbreviation or a misspelled word.

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