Monday 7 August 2017
Corbin 100WC T3W3
I was stuck in the middle of this dusty and beige coloured place. Every Time I walked it was like I was never moving at all it was as flat as a pancake the whole way just like heaven. Then I saw this girl with scarlet hair sitting on a cushion playing a violin, my eyes just watered in relief I found my love. I ran over to her took a kiss but I couldn't I was wondering why but then I knew, I was hallucinating. It is so annoying when it does that. I don't even know where I am.
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