Monday 7 August 2017

Connor 100 WC T3 WK3


As Scarlett laid on her bed with a big cushion behind her head, all the abuse that she had taken in today was a complete overload. Scarlet had been getting bullied lately, she found it really annoying how the bullies had bullied her about the most simplest thing. She had put her hand up to answer a question in class, the question was what is 5x2 she had said the answer was 7,  and because of that she had gone through a whole lot of bullying just today. She decided to play the violin so she could release all of the anger and hate she had inside her system. After that she watered her plant and went to bed. Although she didn’t sleep well at all because she was frightened of what the bullies were going to do next.  

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