I was having the weirdest
dream. I was on the beach at
Mount Maunganui and we went
past some rocks. I could see
a big lump on one of the rocks,
It was a seal. Well I think it was.
I climbed over top of some rocks
to have a closer look. It was
definitely a Seal.
It was cream coloured and its mouth was
wide open. I think that it was laughing.
NO that was impossible.
I stared at the
Seal. It looked at
me and said hi.
I couldn’t believe it, at that
moment I woke up scared.
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