Monday, 21 August 2017
Rylee 100WC T3W5
We roamed the streets of Barcelona city. We were only here for a holiday and I was excited to see all of the ancient towers. I breathed in the scent that was flowing through the air. The sound of people talking over powered the cars motors. All of a sudden people started to run, I wasn't sure what was going on. Waves topple over buildings and innocent lives washed away. As it rushed towards us we start to run faster. All these questions are running through my mind what is this? How did it happen? Next thing I can’t breath…...
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