A seal was swimming in cold sea under -9 degrees celsius. He saw lots of fish big that he wanted to eat but they all swam from him. It was a bad day for him. A Massive shark almost ate him as well and so did a whale also many other things high in the food chain. His girlfriend broke up with him and the doctor told him that he had cancer and he was going to die but the seal jumped out of the water and made a funny face and felt happy even though his day was terrible.
Tuesday, 15 August 2017
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*Big fish, you mean very good other then that thought =)
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