Everyone in the city of wellington thought that today would just be a normal day but what was about to happen was beyond anybody's beliefs. An giant 9.1 magnitude earthquake has just hit Wellington, everybody was scavenging for their lives as a giant crack runs along the top half of the Beehive. The last piece of concrete chips away and the top rolls off. Jamie one of the survivors of this tragic event said “as it came rushing towards us we jumped inside someone's empty car and we just managed to make it out of this killing balls way.”
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