Monday, 14 August 2017
Sam 100WC T3W4
“ Right class today we will start off the lesson with 4 lengths of backstroke then 4 lengths of freestyle.” Lenny the sea lion has a very different job than a lot of the sea lions in iceberg village. He teaches humans how to swim. As soon as his 5 students tried to dive in the cool water Lenny burst into a fit of laughter. “ They look like a bunch of hippos trying to fly!” Lenny exclaimed. But that didn’t phase Lenny because he knew with determination and hard work he would be able to turn them all into great swimmers.
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I really like you idea because it works well with the picture and is entertaining. I Loved it.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story Sam!, especially your simile "they look like a bunch of hippos trying to fly".
ReplyDeleteNatasha
very inspirational story sam. it touched my heart.
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