Hello my name is Scarlet Cushion , and I live in Alaska. Alaska is an amazing place. Except we don’t grow flowers…. Now, there’s this boy in my class and I have the biggest crush on him. Whenever I try and talk to him my face gets all scarlet and it feels like i'm getting watered down with hot chilli. I really like him it’s just he’s sooo annoying.Now the school ball is coming up and I really want him to ask me out. And guess what happened? He asked me out, it was the greatest day of my life.
No comments:
Post a Comment
I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .
I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .