The Awesome Foursome
“Oi I see a car!!!” Shouted Matty. “Aye, what did he say? Oh a car, Chase it!” Replied Barker. As it came rushing towards us we started to chase. There were dogs wandering on the street. Matty the german shepherd leader, Barker The golden Labrador, Matty’s sidekick and then there was Jasper and Casper the twin curly coat retrievers. Everyone knew them. People see them every morning out of their windows or while in their gardens. Some called them ‘the awesome foursome’ and some, ‘a nuisance’. They stuck together and looked after each other. Some humans could learn from them.
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