This was the day I get my cast off. We were about to leave, once gran watered the roses. Suddenly my sister started playing her annoying violin. As my sister got louder gran got more and more agitated.Then she snapped, grabbing the cushion of the londerge gran threw it at Scarlett. But it hit me. It was either a really hard cushion or my gran has a strong throw but it knocked me off the swing, my first instinct was to put my hand out. As it hit the ground I heard a crack. I’m not having my cast off today.
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