{ Abracadabra poof } 3 dozen gallons of ice cream teleport into the middle of the field. “ Yummy ’’. Nora and I were about to grab the camera to take a photo of this edible masterpiece. But the ice cream suddenly melted. I know what you're thinking, ice cream doesn't malt in 30 seconds. Although this wasn't ordinary ice cream, this was magical ice cream. Mmm just saying those words I feel like i’m dreaming. The ice cream twirled and tumbled as it started to pour down. As it came rushing towards us, we layed back on our new ice cream slide celebrating.
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