Funny Stuff
This is a story on a explorer who found a remote island that is quite out of the ordinary he spotted an island unnamed on a satellite image. He sailed over the seas to get to the island, his boat docked upon the jagged rocks and looked at the island taking it all in on where he was. He stared hard at what he thought was a wasps nest on the rocks so he moved closer to the mysterious “nest” and was surprised to see a seal laughing at him, and named the creature the laughing seal and became famous.
MY MAN!!! from Bigmorg
ReplyDeleteI like how you used adjectives, like jagged rocks and mysterious nest, but you could improve on making your story make more sense e.g. island that is quite out of the ordinary he spotted and an island, and a explorer.
ReplyDeleteEmma