Sunday, 13 August 2017

Izzy 100WC T3W4

I scramble onto my rock from yet another hunt for some food. I feel like I'm honestly the slowest seal in the world. I never catch any good fish and that makes me hungry! I get so hungry, I mean I’m a seal, I’m supposed to be hungry right? As I sit on my shiny, smooth rock, setting up for another good nap, I catch a glimpse of my mate, Bart. “AHAH,” I laugh. Bart just fell off his rock and now his rock has been taken by an angry looking seagull. “ Goodluck getting your rock back Bart,” I shout.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous17 August 2017 at 19:45

    I really like your story
    But there is no full stop after someone specks :)

    Poppy

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  2. jfb5718 August 2017 at 02:26

    This made me chuckle Izzy!
    I love the idea of creatures chatting to each other. If I know anything about seagulls, Bary will have a while to wait for his rock!
    Going to pop this on the showcase!

    Mrs Skinner

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