Clear bright blue was painted through the horizon as Mary and her trusty dog Jack woke up to do their morning running. The wind was hitting the yellowish trees, and the October breeze was swaying around Mary as she jogged outside. Everything seemed fine, and the weather was nice and warm. Then suddenly a figure appeared right in front of Mary and Jack, only a few meters away. Instantaneously they stopped. As it came rushing towards us we, stood in their spot for a moment, but then Mary took action, gently pulled Jack’s collar and sprinted with all her energy.
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