Today I will give you guys a quick summary about seals. Seals are amazing creatures that live in cold parts of the world. Seals are semiaquatic marine mammals. They have four flippers, so are in a category of animals known as pinnipedia which means 'fin-footed'. There are around 33 species of seals. Seals are found in most waters of the world, mainly in the Arctic and Antarctic but also in some areas of the tropics. One more fact to end this great piece of work. A seal's whiskers help it to detect prey in dark murky waters. Seals are great.
Monday, 14 August 2017
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ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you used the topic you were provided with. I also like how you've done a lot of research to make your story fantastic. Maybe next time you could explain what Seals are semiaquatic marine mammals means so younger readers understand.
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Great story Ryan I learnt a lot about seals. maybe next time you should add some humor. xD ๐๐ ~Benji
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