I remember
I was curled up on my bed trying to fall asleep I was thinking about what had happened today and what would happen in the day ahead. This is what I usually do, I think it’s a good habit. On this particular night I was thinking about the weekend, since it was Friday. I couldn’t remember what I was doing in the weekend, I knew there was something but what? Then In the blink of an eye there was a flash of my cousins house, I think. But then the flash made me think, hold on, thats what Im doing.
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