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Scarlet loved to play the violin, one day when returning home from a rough day at school she was asked to practice for the huge concert she was in. she always practiced her violin with a pillow on her knee as to make it more comfortable. After a long practice hard working practice she had to water the drying plants that she found annoying and get ready for the huge .concert she was nervous to go to and when going she nailed it.she was playing amazingly and got lots of awards, her family was very proud of her achievements.
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