Sunday 20 August 2017
Matthew Herbert 100WC W5 T3
Me and my friend Jordon went to America for a holiday.We took a fancy plane and touched down in America 5 hours later When we got there we got a rental car and drove down the road and parked at our Hotel.At that exact moment we heard people shouting loudly.We went and cheeked it out only to find a riot going on.We tried walking through the crowd and turned around to see a car start driving.As it came rushing towards us we ran for cover but i fell and the car ran over my foot...
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