The Scarlet Cushion
Once upon a time in a castle known for it’s annoying violin player who always brags, was a red scarlet cushion on a gold stitched white couch, with the sun shining through the recently watered window it looked like a shiny rose. Everyday people would come and go to see the cushion, but at night it turns into a cute fluffy puppy and wonders around the castle yapping and barking waking up all the guests. Some of them even go to the couch and stunned to see that the cushion is gone but surprised to see a white fluffy puppy.
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