Bang!
“Jonathan, pleaded guilty for murder!” Said the Judge
It was a gloomy night, peaceful and billions of stars in the sky… Bang! Wee-Woo! The bank vault door was blown up and they were getting away! Robbery on West street over, copy agent 201 in pursuit. The truck skidded and gambled away from the bank in ease but the speedy police car clipped the truck creating a big crash. I walked out of the car and aimed my gun at the burglar's head. “Please don’t shoot!’ Pleaded the burglar “Why?” Crack! The Flash made me jump and pull the trigger, Bang!
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