“What are you doing Frankie you’ll die” said Max boom and before Frankie could say anything he was gone. But in the flash of lightning i saw Frankie appear in a very cool futuristic car “wow Frankie where did you go” said Max
“To the future” said Frankie
“Lets go to the future in your car” said Max
“Okay said Frankie so max and Frankie zoomed off and then they entered the future. What year is it 3000 wow how did we go that far in the future that's crazy but how do we get back what if we can't.
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