Wednesday 21 June 2017

Connor 100WC T2W8

                                              The Disaster

The pipe could burst any minute now explained Fred. I was a new recruit for a business called Bosses Plumbing. It was my first day on the job and we’d just been called to a dangerous leaking pipe on Fifth Avenue. Once we got there Fred came up with a plan and we started to try and fix the leak.


Before I knew it the pipe ruptured and water came gushing out. The water was flowing rapidly and I found myself being thrown forward onto the hard concrete ground. I quickly got to my feet and looked around to see if my work mates were ok. We luckily managed to come away with no injuries.

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