Dear Andrew
I think it is really nice of you to do what you’r doing. I think it is a big scrafice to do what you are doing because you have to stay away from your family. Do you like your job and if you could would you choose a diffrent job. when did you start doing your job and why did you chose to do Vso as your job. did you have to train for your job. Have you ever had to try to get to two places at once how. Many people work for Vso
Your sincerely Max
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