Monday 5 June 2017
Benji ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ
Bruce was flying over those waves, he was riding the wave machine, attracting a big crowd. Getting out of the pool, Wayne pushed through the crowd to see what was going on. Looking at the crowd he quickly stated it was his turn and got on a surfboard and started. He was barely staying up trying to move from side to side when someone shouted “do a trick” so he tried to do a jump quickly losing balance wondering if someone was going to turn the water off but the water kept gushing out. He fell and hit his head.
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