Thursday 8 June 2017

Max T2W6

Jim and Fred lived in a town called Edgecomb. One day while Jim and Fred were at home doing their homework their mum said “a cyclone is about to hit we need to go to the store to get prepared.” So while Jim, Fred and their mum were getting organised for the ba term of events Fred saw that some water started flowing down the street. Their mum yelled hurry we need to get home before the flood hits! While they were at home Fred said to his mum “the water just keeps gushing out” what should we do now?
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  1. Anonymous9 June 2017 at 03:35

    Hi Max
    Lewis and I really liked your story. We were a little bit scared for the characters to begin with with the forecast cyclone, we do hope that it ends well.
    If you would like to read Lewis' writing you can find it here. https://redbridgewriting.wordpress.com/2017/06/06/the-unfixed-tap-by-lewis-h/
    Miss T and Lewis
    Hampshire, England

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