BOOM ! egg yolk splatters everywhere. There goes the world's largest chocolate egg. Whats going on ? well it all started on the day before easter . . . The mayor of plastic town wanted to do something special for the plastic people so he decided to make a humongous chocolate egg. This was made not to eat but to gaze upon. The inside of of the egg was made from toxic goo. On easter morning the plastic people heard a BOOM ! so the mayor came to see what had made the awful sound. Suddenly he noticed radioactive goo oozing from the jumbo chocolate egg.
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