Thursday, 8 June 2017

Natasha T2W6

Jake looked at his home last time before leaving. Before he left this place.

There was a tsunami warning that had affected the whole city so everyone started evacuating and left Jakes’s family with no choice. Scientists predicted this to be the biggest tsunami recorded in history. ‘why did it have to happen in Miami?’ thought Jake.They waited to for watching the new waiting for the disaster to approach, and one day live footage was seen. It was extremely terrifying for Jake. The water just kept gushing out of the ocean and onto everything that used to call home.
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  1. Mrs Boyce10 June 2017 at 10:28

    Hi Natasha,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done!
    It must have been very difficult to watch your home being destroyed.
    Good work this week.
    Mrs Boyce
    Cork.
    Ireland

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