Wai e Rere
Anahera Ngata lives in a family of violence and fear. Her father physically abuses her, her mother and her five siblings .She lives next to a large farm and often explores it when she can get away from her large family . Anahera found the amazing wai e rere falls one day whilst exploring. The first time Anahera saw the falls she exclaimed “the water just keeps gushing out! “. The water is a bright blue which goes perfectly with the dark green plants around it. Anahera loves this place and is the perfect way to get away from her dangerous life.
-Sam
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