Wednesday, 28 June 2017
Grace T2W9
I woke up this morning super excited because we were going to walk up Mount Maunganui and have a picnic know that when I woke up this morning it was raining cats and dogs I was so disappointed I ran to Mum and ask if we were still going and mum said “yes we I still going and just see how the weather is”said Abby's mum. so if I win and started packing a picnic, I packed some yummy cut up apples, some orange juice, in some yummy ham and cheese sandwiches. as we got in the car dad saidQ it's such a shame the weather's so yuck”. but then the weather changed dramatically. so if we went on our picnic and now the weather is lovely.
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