Wednesday, 14 June 2017

🖤 Poppy 100wc T2W7 🖤

Dear Andrew Sesay,

I think you're amazing how you save lives at Binkolo Health Clinic every day! You’re a great role model and an awesome inspiration to young people like me. It would be amazing with people like yourself in Sierra Leone. I’m sure everyone in your family is very proud of you. Do you like sleeping at the hospital?. Keep saving lives, children and women, thank you!
-Poppy
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  1. Anonymous15 June 2017 at 13:49

    Hi Poppy

    I really like the style of your writing in this letter, it has a relaxed and chatty style and isn't too formal. I think this may be down to your final sentence which also does a great job of rounding off your writing.
    Miss T
    Hampshire, England

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