My name is Jeff, I'm a Clownfish. Exploring the ocean is my favourite hobby. You'll see beautiful scenery and fish to talk to, but the bummer is that you'll come across a coke can or a plastic bag, every now and again. Fish might even get caught up in it!
Tenth January 2017
I may have been a little bit busy for the past few days, but I discovered the most gnarly caves, they were so pretty!- I was going to the caves then in the flash of lightning I saw... Sharp, white, teeth.
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