My name is Noah Williams. This was the day I got shot and died.
A very peculiar sound woke me up. My alarm clock 9:18am in the morning I had slept in but now is when my day of tough but productive day of building has to start. Clonk! Clonk! I know who that is that was my dog rushing up the stairs to wake me up. I got out of bed and get dressed have my breakfast and get on my way to work. In the flash of lightning I got shot and died with nothing to do.
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