Wednesday 31 May 2017
Alice
The familiar sound of mum and dad’s shiny, new black volvo making its was towards the dinnery for their anniversary dinner made me uneasy, as I would be home alone tonight.
At every movement or sound my heart lept out of my chest. The stormy, wet weather didn’t help either. I tried to firmly remind myself that I’m just being silly and seeing things.
In the flash of lighting I saw a large, bulky figure out of the corner of my eye. I froze, to afraid to move. I attempted to scream but nothing came out, then everything went black.
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