The weather that changed dramatically
I put my nice colourful hat on my head and stepped onto the beach with my jandals on my feet. It was a scorching hot day, so I slapped sunblock all over myself. Sitting down on my fluffy towel, I watched the sparkling blue waves crash onto the sandy beach, all while eating a nice chocolate ice-cream. I decided to take a short swim in the ocean and then all of a sudden the weather changed dramatically. The wind was blowing the sand everywhere and next thing there was sand in my eyes and mouth. Rubbing my eyes I was finally able to reopen them again. Typical Wellington Weather.
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