The Egg
Blake is your average guy. He has a good job and has a reasonable amount of money. But, one day something very weird happened. A giant creamy caramel chocolate egg fell from the sky! The egg created havoc, blocking the main road and causing heaps of traffic. All the emergency services and construction workers came to take a look at the mysterious egg. Blake took his magnifying glass out of his pocket and examined the egg. The sun was shining bright, but the egg wasn’t melting! Blake touched the egg with his hand… SPLAT! SPLAT! Now it’s raining chocolate eggs!
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