100 Word Challenge
I loved birds. I knew they liked seeds, so I ate an apple, took out the seeds, dropped them on the footpath and waited.
The next day there was a big storm and everything was dark. I looked outside. The seeds were still there. Lighting flashed, and I thought I saw something big. Lightning flashed again and in the flash of lightning I saw a huge owl in the sky, bigger than the house.
I ran outside and it landed, pecked at the seeds and looked at me. I climbed on it’s back and we flew away.
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