100 Word Challenge
Gibson Zander, a crazy sea feared vigilante sailing the high seas of the Caribbean. “Ahoy Mateys” Lester ‘yellow teeth’ Atterton shouts from the edge of the crows nest. “Enemy ship approaching” Burney Louis quickly slips down the ropes to ring the bell, but when the weather changed dramatically the howling winds blew him off overboard rushing the men faster. When suddenly lots of explosions go off with whistling loud balls of fury howling their way towards the ship hitting a man and knocking down one of the sail posts. No One on that boat made it out of there alive.
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