Tuesday, 27 June 2017

Poppy's 100WC T2W9

It was a cold freezing morning. I had at least three layers on. I decided to put another jacket on but then the weather changed dramatically, the sun came out, all the ice melted onto the beautiful green grass. I went inside to take off all the layers I had on to change into my togs. After I changed I went outside again and jumped into the pool but when I came up the sky was all cloudy and it started to rain, I went inside, looked back and the sky was clear.

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