The Mysterious Malteser Mystery
I was casually walking down the sidewalk eating creamy maltesers, popping them in my mouth one by one, when I came across one that was rather tingly and hard. I spat it out in disgust and it cracked open on the concrete and the gooey contents oozed out of the hard chocolate shell. I stared at it in awe. To worsen my situation mini construction workers hopped out of the malteser and began to place cones around the outside of the gooey mess as if it was hazardous. I looked at what was happening, then I swiftly turned and bolted.
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