Dear Mr. Andrew Sesay, first i'd like to say thank you for giving up your time and for sleeping away from home to save women and their babies. I think that what you are doing is amazingly selfless and kind. I hope you know how much you are appreciated. With all the lives of women and babies you have saved, I wonder what it feels like to successfully save a life. I admire how you have persevered and practiced. It is a great pleasure to be writing this letter to you. Good wishes to drawing breath.
Sincerely
Rosie Lloyd
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