100 word challenge week 7 term2
One day i was in the break room chatting to my colleague then (bee doo bee doo) a emergency they need me. I Jumped up off my chair and rushed to the patient's room the nurse said to me this woman needs help delivering the baby,so then i out on my rubber gloves and got ready for theater. Meanwhile the nurses got her ready for theater. When it was time to do the surgery i had my work colleagues around me, it was time to do the c- section. We cut the stomach and got the baby out safely.
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