Thursday 8 June 2017
Jordi 100WC T2W6
Diving for freedom, attacking for revenge and defending for a chance of survival. Yes this was a water fight. '' Splish, splosh, splash ATTACK'' kora shouted. ''Kora, Kc and Kate how dare you have a water balloon fight inside the house'' screamed their mother. { Ping wishhh } the water balloon bursted and the water just kept gushing out towards my mum. Why were me and my sisters having a water balloon fight inside the house ? It all started after my birthday Party I got so much water balloons from my party I gave some to my sisters. Than they attacked me inside.
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